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J.J. Phillips
@jjphillipsyo.bsky.social
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#AmQuerying Hunted for his meteorite wand, twelve-year-old Catch must master spell-hacked spycraft to stop the Acolytes from seizing the Minerals of Power.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 21h
Great interview! Unfortunately I cannot post on the blog post to enter. Keep getting errors. I also subscribed to the blog.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 1d
Can you break it into two books?
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 1d
“Harumph" is such a fun word. Gotta live a good onomatopoeia. Congrats on three month anniversary!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 1d
It’s great! And, a T.V. show adaptation of Alchemy of Secrets is in development by Julie Plec for Universal!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 1d
Signed up!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 1d
The unfortunate cost of a great book is the surrender of sleep in pursuit of a thrilling conclusion.

*Read in the voice of Niles the butler from The Nanny (because that’s what I’m watching).
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
Over the summer, it was a hundred and one degree day, but still it rained. The rain turned to a ghostly fog when it hit the blacktop. The ghostly fog made it into the first 50 words of my manuscript!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
What happened to your birthplace?
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
“Despite the fact that London was the highest paid and most famous author of his day, he received hundreds of rejection letters before being published.” -J.L. Museum

Reminder to all of us #AmQuerying that even the greats started off with rejection.

Keep writing! Best of luck!

#AmWriting #SCBWI
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
I’m excited! Any examples available for the pitches? Are there any writing prompts? Limits to how many submissions an author can make in the 21st? #MG #F #Q
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
July 4th! Hotdogs, burgers, cake, and fireworks.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
Ahh I just read further down your MSWL that you are not looking for fantasy. Hope you find some good matches when you open!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 2d
Hilarious MG coming at you on Wednesday! Because every kid could use a fun spell-hacked spycraft story.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 3d
Perfect, thanks!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 3d
The advice for queriers is so muddled. Lots of YouTube vids, blog posts, and an editor I talked to all recommend personalizing.

Now, I’m reading a book repped by each agent I’m querying, to make sure my story is a good fit for the agent, and to have a reason to personalize the letter.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 3d
Risking his friendships sounds vague. So does getting tangled with his new mentor.

It sounds like the A plot (their lives are at stake) has good stakes.

For the B plot (personal stakes), what does the MC want? Who is standing in their way? What happens if they fail to get what they want?
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 4d
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 4d
What are the stakes?
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 4d
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 5d
Spooky inspiration for the season from the grave of Jack London and his dream home that never was.

He died a few years after it burned down and was never able to rebuild.

#AmWriting #AmQuerying #SCBWI #SCBWIOKTFEST25
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 5d
"Don't loaf and invite inspiration; light out after it with a club, and if you don't get it you will nonetheless get something that looks remarkably like it."
-Jack London

Stopped in to see Jack London’s museum. Fired up for next week’s #SCBWI in Oakland! #SCBWIOktFest25

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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 5d
100%! Querying feels like a completely different part of my brain, and puts me off the writing where I need to be immersed in the world I am creating.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 5d
Using it as a way to slow down and query more intentionally. So far, it’s helped make querying less stressful and more enjoyable!
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 6d
Love this! I’m reading a book repped by each of the agents I’m querying, ideally a book I can comp to.
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J.J. Phillips @jjphillipsyo.bsky.social · 6d
Thanks for the positivity! Querying feels like throwing darts in the dark, after being spun around ten times, are told the dartboard is somewhere south by southwest, the dartboard is a moving target, and you have to hit a bullseye to get an agent.