Jesse Pohlman (He/Him)
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Jesse Pohlman (He/Him)
@jpohlmanwriting.com
Queer, Pagan Sci-Fi/Fantasy author from Long Island, NY. Recovering Teacher, ex-Lifeguard.

Not a big fan of AI "art" unless it's made by a real-deal AGI Sapience that doesn't yet exist. Ask before DMing, please.

https://www.JPohlmanWriting.com/about
Three in a year? Goddess Above that's rough. Much respect and may you find some peace, too.
December 3, 2025 at 9:48 PM
Thank you. I'm working on it, it's just a rough year lol.
December 3, 2025 at 9:44 PM
Appreciated. :)
December 3, 2025 at 9:44 PM
So POTK3 is written very head-hoppy and I don't think I stayed in (or, really, GOT in) Branden's head during the scene in question.

Probably the best fix for this issue is to re-read the Syd fight, pick some chunk of it Branden took part in, re-write it from his POV, and have that be his flashback.
December 3, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Appreciated, thank you. :)
December 3, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Henry Cuellar: *Is corrupt.*
Donald Trump: *Is corrupt, so pardons the corrupt.*
Hakeem Jeffries: Sounds great!!!! :) :) :) <3 <3 <3

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December 3, 2025 at 9:08 PM
You know, I think you're right that Jeffries does it more often.

But I'll still never forgive Pelosi for not Impeaching Bush and Cheney. Trump may never have gotten into politics if Republican war crimes were at least somewhat checked in, what was it, 2006?
December 3, 2025 at 9:03 PM
Wordword.

Thanks for the kind thoughts. :)
December 3, 2025 at 6:46 PM
I actually don't know what BTDT means. :)
December 3, 2025 at 6:18 PM
Want a copy for yourself? You can even get it in physical print!

www.amazon.com/Protostar-Me...
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December 3, 2025 at 2:04 AM