Hiria Dunning
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Claire Hiria Ahuriri-Dunning (she/her/they/them/ia) aka Kara Moon Ngāti Porou, Ngāti Kahungunu, Ngāti Raukawa, Pākehā Author, poet, game writer, playwright Find my work here: https://hiriadunning.com Host of #pretendpanel, a weekend writing prompt
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#pretendpanel calendar for September

✨Tell me all about how you come up with characters✨
#pretendpanel
a daily prompt tag hosted by @hiriadunning.bsky.social
SEPTEMBER - CHARACTER THEME
September 5th: Where do your characters come from?
September 6th: Have you ever written a self-insert character?
September 12th: How much work do you put into forming your characters before you start writing them?
September 13th: Is there something you're dying to tell people about a character but you can't make it fit into your story?
September 19th: What makes a character memorable in your opinion?
September 20th: Do you write the same character over and over again?
September 26th: Do you have a favourite character that you've written?
September 27th: Freebie Saturday - post whatever!    
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#LGBTQWriteAThon goal share:
🥀 draft 3 of vampire novella Marcie - need to get at least halfway thru before next goal share day
⚓️ little visits to first draft land as always
📚 I'd really like to finish reading my friend's manuscript before I see her this weekend!!
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#LGBTQWriteAThon October 13:

Goals day! What are your goals this week?

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Please don't hate me, Daphne and Iona fans 🙏💚

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She is needed on the Paxos, backing up Kallista and fighting the good fight.

So the ending as I currently see it, unusually for a romance, is that they say goodbye for now, with a promise to reunite in time (though I think they also establish that it's an open relationship too, no jealousy)

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she can be part of the emancipation of the Isles (also this means she gets to have an ass-kicking Gandalf at Helm's Deep style return moment, probably in Book 3 of the main trilogy, where she can save the Paxos from certain doom - spoilers for another book!!!)

Iona of course cannot go with her.
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swashbuckling escape from peril and reunite after searching for their answers apart, is that Daphne volunteers to go to Nairu with the mages, with the full understanding that as she is quite advanced already she will be put on a streamlined track, and she intends to return to the Isles asap so
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Given that there's this whole thing going on with Iona and Daphne needing to find themselves, and to become more comfortable living with uncertainty, AND given what I established in septopolis about wizbiz city kidnapping all mages, I think what has to happen, once the girls have a fun little
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Going to spoil the ending in the next post and onwards, so don't read it if you don't want to be spoiled.

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#PlotTober
Oh god........
So I do have this one ending in mind already. I'm scared of posting it because I might piss some people off. At the same time, given the character arcs as I've outlined them so far, and the rules of the world as I've established them, I kinda feel like I have to...
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#PlotTober Day 14: Story endings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

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#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

14. Now that you have some ideas of your story's beginning and the main character's goals & growth, can you come up with a few different story endings that would be satisfying for a reader?

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It starts from Alexander's exit from London, almost immediately following 1660's plot.

I'm still going with my philosophy of "slow start", letting you soak in the characters and setup first, but I do plan to have the first action scene (which I've finally figured out. ish) in chapter 1!
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#PlotTober Day 13: Story beginnings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

13. Let's begin brainstorming the main plot points of our WIPs. Knowing what you know of your main character(s), what are a few potential ways you could begin their story?

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Recently? James Baldwin…I’m reading Giovanni’s Room currently, and I enjoy his artful and compelling descriptions, among other things. As a writer myself, his writing is aspirational.
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#pretendpanel I can't wait to catch up with your responses! Life is super busy here - I'm at a fundraising dinner right now - but let me know...

October 11th: Is there a deceased author, writer, or poet that you've really connected with? 

#WritingCommunity #Writers #Authors #WritingPrompts
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A prompt tag hosted by @hiriadunning.bsky.social
October 11th: Is there a deceased author, writer, or poet that you've really connected with? 
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The story opens with Atl preparing for the tournament where he will fight the other candidates to the death for the crown. He gets outed as trans, and must make the decision to go through with the tournament anyway even without support from the Hive, only the drones, and he plans to die+
#PlotTober
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#PlotTober Day 13: Story beginnings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

13. Let's begin brainstorming the main plot points of our WIPs. Knowing what you know of your main character(s), what are a few potential ways you could begin their story?

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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#PlotTober 13

We are starting off in transit. Wren, Spencer, Bruce, and Molly are going to be on a coach leaving the city. They are going to stop for the night in a small town, rent rooms in an Inn, then sneak out to throw off a tail.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #Wrencer
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#PlotTober Day 13: Story beginnings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

13. Let's begin brainstorming the main plot points of our WIPs. Knowing what you know of your main character(s), what are a few potential ways you could begin their story?

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Since Lex is the primary main character, I'm starting off with the situation on her home planet, Belenos. Readers need to see the dire situation of her father's rule and her quiet horror.

Daemrin comes in shortly after for more worldbuilding, but the two don't meet yet, beyond a glance. #PlotTober
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#PlotTober Day 13: Story beginnings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

13. Let's begin brainstorming the main plot points of our WIPs. Knowing what you know of your main character(s), what are a few potential ways you could begin their story?

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Beginnings! So I've already written a first chapter a long time ago (though it needs to be rewritten now that I have a better grasp on the world). We're starting off at the literal beginning for the twins: their birth.

Their father Elisgood Blake is only just starting to become 🧵
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#PlotTober Day 13: Story beginnings

Answer the prompt on the card by quoting this post. Remember, answering a prompt is always optional. Even if you don't share it publicly, I hope the prompt encourages you to think about it privately.

#WritingCommunity #WritingPrompt #WriteSky
#PlotTober - a WIP plotting game by @gunsmile.bsky.social

13. Let's begin brainstorming the main plot points of our WIPs. Knowing what you know of your main character(s), what are a few potential ways you could begin their story?

Remember: Use the #PlotTober hashtag, engage with others, and have fun!
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Congratulations again, Anne! What a star!

#membercongrats #shortstory #winner #congrats #specficnz
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the pirates against the imperialist Capital.

The future looks bright to her, but I hope that the audience will be able to read between the lines how naive and dependent she is, and she's going to have a lot of growing to do before the book is done.

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We then get a chapter from Daphne's POV at her farewell party, where she tries to fish out as much info about her deadbeat dad from her mother before she leaves, and also where she does everything she can to ensnare Iona's attention. She's looking forward to using her magic to help the cause of
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An attacking force arrives to retrieve Daphne, thinking she's been kidnapped. Kallista's crush Geni manages to avert a disaster with her peace magic (much to Iona's chagrin, looking at the lovesick expression on Kallista's face!) and negotiates for Daphne to be allowed to leave the island.
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The diplomacy goes all right, the dryads are a bit too aloof but maybe there's hope for the future. Iona leaves, thinking that maybe they might be able to work with the dryads in the future. Everything seems fine...

Then she realises that Daphne has followed her down to the village.
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But Iona is determined to get an alliance with the dryads against the invading forces of the Capital. Oh and also aforementioned bff Captain Kallista has a sprained ankle so she can't make the trek.

Iona meets the dryads, and Daphne, who is instantly, obviously, taken with her.
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