#𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
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whittakesontropes.bsky.social
whittakesontropes.bsky.social
@whittakesontropes.bsky.social
Carter felt the weight of that responsibility like a gut punch.

#camprevpit #onelineMC #crplunamoths
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 12:15 PM Everybody can reply
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sagecollins.bsky.social
Sage like the Pumpkin Spice
@sagecollins.bsky.social
#CampRevPit #CRPWizardWasps #OneLineMC

“I’m pretty sure a queen bee once flew into my ear and got into my brain when I was little. She created a little hive, and the worker bees just buzz in my ears all the time."
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 6:29 AM Everybody can reply
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juliahj.bsky.social
Julia HJ
@juliahj.bsky.social
“What’d you do—look this up on Wikipedia?” Maisie asked.
“No.” Diana stiffened. “I read the references. There’s a difference.”
#WIP #OneLineMC #CRPBees 🐝
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 2:58 AM Everybody can reply
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jelliclejay.bsky.social
jay kang romanus
@jelliclejay.bsky.social
It’s another great day for driving. “The sky likes you,” Elton says when Beck idly points it out.

“The sky doesn’t have feelings,” Beck replies, putting on the brakes as a sedan zips in front of him to reach an exit, “and that’s a good thing.”

(i get 2 lines for 2 MCs 😉)

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 1:57 AM Everybody can reply
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suzyawin.bsky.social
Suzy A. Win is Querying!
@suzyawin.bsky.social
“Why do you have to be such a creep, Pearl?”

That's it. That's the line.

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 1:36 AM Everybody can reply
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sampeil.bsky.social
Sam Peil 🧟😈
@sampeil.bsky.social
“Honestly getting cuffed was worth it solely for the red meat.”

#onelinemc #katydeads
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 1:30 AM Everybody can reply
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keyganssmcclellan.bsky.social
Keygan S. S. McClellan
@keyganssmcclellan.bsky.social
MC's ally, nervous: "Do the paramilitaries have blood mages like you? Does the Sanguine Order?"

MC, flippant: "Like *me*? No one does."

#OneLineMC #CRPFireflies #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 12:58 AM Everybody can reply
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emmiemarch.bsky.social
Emmie March
@emmiemarch.bsky.social
“I don’t want anyone saying I’m going wherever I’m heading because I got favoritism, or because I didn’t work for it.”
-Abbie Murphy, The Charade
#crpdamselflies #camprevpit #onelinemc
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 24, 2025 at 12:34 AM Everybody can reply
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elisedevaney.bsky.social
Elise Devaney
@elisedevaney.bsky.social
"Rayne, unfortunately, did not understand."
#camprevpit #OneLineMC
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 11:35 PM Everybody can reply
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mspelbrinkwrites.bsky.social
Meghan Spelbrink is QUERYING 📚❤️🤞
@mspelbrinkwrites.bsky.social
#crplunamoths #camprevpit #onelinemc “Sapina was done acting like a lady.”
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 10:53 PM Everybody can reply
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abbyjwrites.bsky.social
Abby Jackson
@abbyjwrites.bsky.social
#camprevpit #CRPfireflies #OneLineMC

"Alyss cranked her earbuds up, blocking out the drenched man’s cries for help to concentrate on her favorite part of the dark pop song."
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 10:01 PM Everybody can reply
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amandaciancarelli.bsky.social
amandaciancarelli.bsky.social
@amandaciancarelli.bsky.social
Haydes Chronos was tired of making herself small for inconsequential men.

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit #CRPDamselflies
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 9:02 PM Everybody can reply
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katieknightley.bsky.social
Katie Knightley
@katieknightley.bsky.social
Day 3 #OneLineMC #CampRevPit #CRPDamselflies

This is my year of yes. I have goals and priorities, and they include staying away from Jace.

*Dear reader, she does not stay away from Jace.
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 8:02 PM Everybody can reply
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sw-writesya.bsky.social
Steph Whitaker ✨ is Querying
@sw-writesya.bsky.social
#OneLineMC

Charlie wanted to do something. Anything. To make it stop, to fix it, to somehow make everything feel right again.
But what if she couldn’t?
What if no one could?

#CRPGlasswings #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 7:21 PM Everybody can reply
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alynnrosefinch.bsky.social
Artie Lynn Rosefinch
@alynnrosefinch.bsky.social
“Perhaps if he looks at it as a punishment, he can convince himself to go through with it.”

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit #CRPDamselflies
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 7:19 PM Everybody can reply
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annlittler.bsky.social
Ann Littler
@annlittler.bsky.social
Dual POV so one for each.

FMC about MMC: His bed is made immaculately, with no clothes hanging from The Chair.

MMC about FMC: She cricks her neck and walks over. Even though her Rogue is nowhere near the height of my Knight, she somehow stands taller.

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 6:58 PM Everybody can reply
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rabauthor.bsky.social
Rory | Author *₊˚☕୧
@rabauthor.bsky.social
Like a dog with its bone... Just a succubus with her lover.

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit #CRPLunaMoths
"Mine, mine, mine," the voice in her mind sang as she dug her heels into his back, trapping him against her.
April 23, 2025 at 5:44 PM Everybody can reply
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kiddyjoy.bsky.social
Claire Kidwell
@kiddyjoy.bsky.social
#CRPFireflies #OneLineMC

From my BATB WIP 🥀✨🤖
Still in early drafting but her living space gives us my MC’s vibes.

“Scraps of outdated circuit boards, speakers, and rare ancient stereos carefully nestled in cotton littered her workbench, which took up half of what would’ve been a living room.”
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:54 PM Everybody can reply
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jenniferluce.bsky.social
Jennifer Luce
@jenniferluce.bsky.social
"In the end, I had betrayed him—his love. Used him the moment he laid eyes on me. And I would do so again if given the chance."

#OneLineMC #CampRevPit #Katydeads
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:24 PM Everybody can reply
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rachelblaine.bsky.social
Rachel Blaine
@rachelblaine.bsky.social
“I mean... you are drinking vodka and seltzer in the bathroom during my Shiva. But this is far from the strangest choice you’ve made.” - The spirit of Ava's recently deceased mother Rivkah. #katydeads #CampRevPit #OneLineMC
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:21 PM Everybody can reply
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heatherwalrath.bsky.social
Heather Walrath | Historical Fiction Author
@heatherwalrath.bsky.social
“There is far more inside that clever mind than you let anyone else see.” Kurt cupped a hand beneath Elsa’s chin. “I want to see it—every beautiful piece.”

#CampRevPit #OneLineMC #CRPBees #WritingCommunity
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:19 PM Everybody can reply
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professoremily.bsky.social
Prof Emily but Spoopier Now
@professoremily.bsky.social
Mireia: "If you ask me, anyone who waits around for fate to decide their lives for them has already given up on being alive."

Kena [from Mireia's POV]: This was Kena the gardener, the caretaker, full of simple love for the beauty of the earth.

#Atlantis #OneLineMC #CampRevPit
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:06 PM Everybody can reply
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gabriela-stluke.bsky.social
Gabriela is querying a dystomance
@gabriela-stluke.bsky.social
For sure it's this one (or at least I think?):

I’m not a coward, but I almost wish I was.

#CRPDamselflies #CampRevPit #OneLineMC
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 4:04 PM Everybody can reply
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papadjinn.bsky.social
PapaDjinn is querying
@papadjinn.bsky.social
Like a child who scraped his knee falling off a skateboard he begged his parents for, I hung up the opportunity for failure by the trucks and never looked back.
#OneLineMC #WritingCommunity #BookSky
reviseresub.bsky.social Revise & Resub @reviseresub.bsky.social · Apr 23
DAY 3: #𝗢𝗻𝗲𝗟𝗶𝗻𝗲𝗠𝗖
Good morning, Campers! Today, we focus on your MC. Share a line from your manuscript that tells us all we need to know about your MC's personality.
On the same grassy green hill beneath a starry night sky, the firefly clings to a branch and dangles a tied stack of story notes from a stick with the label “Darlings” written on the top page. The caterpillar reaches for the tied bundle of notes with mouth wide open, ready to chow down. Behind the tree, which still has bite marks from the caterpillar’s previous meal, the mantis holds her claws to her face in dismay. Dawn is beginning to tint the horizon red.
April 23, 2025 at 3:53 PM Everybody can reply
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