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What am I missing here? I know this is a gross simplification but what is the key gap in my understanding here?
What am I missing here? I know this is a gross simplification but what is the key gap in my understanding here?
Here it feels like the assumed audience is just… not very bright and needs everything explained in tedious detail, between the overlong unfunny montages.
Here it feels like the assumed audience is just… not very bright and needs everything explained in tedious detail, between the overlong unfunny montages.
Which is always a problem in spec fiction.
Which is always a problem in spec fiction.
You could trim each one down by more than half and it would be BETTER.
You could trim each one down by more than half and it would be BETTER.
It’s fine. Well made, and it has a plot but it feels like should be a quirky novel.
It’s fine. Well made, and it has a plot but it feels like should be a quirky novel.
I do love chia seeds in overnight oats. With pistachio oat milk, a bit of honey and a sprinkle of chocolate drops.
I do love chia seeds in overnight oats. With pistachio oat milk, a bit of honey and a sprinkle of chocolate drops.