Carolina | Looking for feedback
@carolinampereira.bsky.social
Born to be a writer, forced to be a software engineer | she/her | 25yo | Portugal
So cute 💜 I love your art style
December 23, 2025 at 9:15 AM
So cute 💜 I love your art style
They have different styles, yeah.
Peter has a messy hairstyle and prefers shirts and sweaters.
Daniel has a sort of buzzcut and a more sporty style.
Peter has a messy hairstyle and prefers shirts and sweaters.
Daniel has a sort of buzzcut and a more sporty style.
December 22, 2025 at 11:18 PM
They have different styles, yeah.
Peter has a messy hairstyle and prefers shirts and sweaters.
Daniel has a sort of buzzcut and a more sporty style.
Peter has a messy hairstyle and prefers shirts and sweaters.
Daniel has a sort of buzzcut and a more sporty style.
Peter and Daniel are identical twins, if someone met both at the same time I guess that would stand out. They find it amusing.
Other than that, Peter's tattoos. He's very self conscious about it, so it might be uncomfortable.
Other than that, Peter's tattoos. He's very self conscious about it, so it might be uncomfortable.
December 22, 2025 at 10:55 PM
Peter and Daniel are identical twins, if someone met both at the same time I guess that would stand out. They find it amusing.
Other than that, Peter's tattoos. He's very self conscious about it, so it might be uncomfortable.
Other than that, Peter's tattoos. He's very self conscious about it, so it might be uncomfortable.
December 22, 2025 at 8:43 AM
He's more of a physical work guy. He's in infantry.
December 22, 2025 at 7:42 AM
He's more of a physical work guy. He's in infantry.
This is a modern world setting, so it's school and college as we know it.
Daniel and Peter completed highschool. By the end of the story, Daniel has been in the military academy for two years.
Peter is taking some messy steps to become a horse trainer. He will also take a psychology degree.
Daniel and Peter completed highschool. By the end of the story, Daniel has been in the military academy for two years.
Peter is taking some messy steps to become a horse trainer. He will also take a psychology degree.
December 21, 2025 at 11:04 PM
This is a modern world setting, so it's school and college as we know it.
Daniel and Peter completed highschool. By the end of the story, Daniel has been in the military academy for two years.
Peter is taking some messy steps to become a horse trainer. He will also take a psychology degree.
Daniel and Peter completed highschool. By the end of the story, Daniel has been in the military academy for two years.
Peter is taking some messy steps to become a horse trainer. He will also take a psychology degree.
He does! People like him.
December 20, 2025 at 11:45 PM
He does! People like him.
Peter finds it reassuring, even if he doesn't really know how to deal with them.
Daniel is avoidant.
Jonathan absolutely loves and needs praise. He likes standing out and making sure everyone notices and congratulates his accomplishments.
Daniel is avoidant.
Jonathan absolutely loves and needs praise. He likes standing out and making sure everyone notices and congratulates his accomplishments.
December 20, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Peter finds it reassuring, even if he doesn't really know how to deal with them.
Daniel is avoidant.
Jonathan absolutely loves and needs praise. He likes standing out and making sure everyone notices and congratulates his accomplishments.
Daniel is avoidant.
Jonathan absolutely loves and needs praise. He likes standing out and making sure everyone notices and congratulates his accomplishments.
I like backstory and bonding for Peter and Daniel. It's always very sentimental. I like writing introspective scenes.
December 19, 2025 at 11:03 PM
I like backstory and bonding for Peter and Daniel. It's always very sentimental. I like writing introspective scenes.
December 19, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Ahah fez-me rir, nice
December 19, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Ahah fez-me rir, nice
Not prophetic or anything, this is a very close to irl story.
But Peter has nightmares that are actually memories erased by trauma.
But Peter has nightmares that are actually memories erased by trauma.
December 18, 2025 at 11:19 PM
Not prophetic or anything, this is a very close to irl story.
But Peter has nightmares that are actually memories erased by trauma.
But Peter has nightmares that are actually memories erased by trauma.
December 18, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Peter and Daniel would choose family. Just them and their mother. Something simple and quiet.
December 17, 2025 at 11:08 PM
Peter and Daniel would choose family. Just them and their mother. Something simple and quiet.
December 17, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Yep. He used to be a true neutral. But life and dissociative disorders happened.
December 17, 2025 at 5:46 PM
Yep. He used to be a true neutral. But life and dissociative disorders happened.
This, but make it "mean"or something like that instead of evil for Daniel and Patrícia.
And Peter hasn't always been like that.
And Peter hasn't always been like that.
December 17, 2025 at 4:58 PM
This, but make it "mean"or something like that instead of evil for Daniel and Patrícia.
And Peter hasn't always been like that.
And Peter hasn't always been like that.
How I feel you. I've been working on the same project for almost seven years now. And it's not even a complex story. There's no crazy world building. It's a simple YA.
December 15, 2025 at 10:35 PM
How I feel you. I've been working on the same project for almost seven years now. And it's not even a complex story. There's no crazy world building. It's a simple YA.