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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 6h

Sent out a second query plus two agents added to the non query list after checking out their websites and getting sense Wasphole doesn't match their vibe. Is that overthinking? 😅

#fantasylit #fantasysky #amwriting #writingcommunity #booksky #writersky #amquerying

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 1d

Sent out a query! 🫣

#writersky #amquerying #amwriting

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 5d

🍾 UNDER 120,000 WORDS!! 💐

This gets all the happy emojis because getting it down from 160,000 without losing content meant going through condensing line by line 🌈🎉🎊

Proofread, back to my betas (❤️🧡💚💙💜) and then querying resumes!

Random photo I took of a peacock and a peahen because why not?

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 5d

Must you #WaspholeBandit ?

A black cat hiding in a drawer full of black knickers and socks.

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 6d

#WIPSnips

“Are you asleep great-grandfather? Or dead?” asked Hama hopefully, craning around to check when Duke Crotalus did not reply.

The old man was propped up by cushions in the duke’s seat breathing labouredly, dozing but disobligingly alive.

✨#WIPSnips✨ A Daily Writing Share Tag @wipsnips.bsky.social · 6d

The #WIPSnips word for October 12th is "hope"

#WriteSky #WritingCommunity #WritingPrompts

#WIPSnips a bluesky writing community tag
October 12 - hope
Share a line from your WIP with the daily word for inspiration
Use #WIPSnips. Don't forget Alt Text for graphics
Synonyms, variation and vibes are fine.
Support others on the #WIPSnips tag!
Hosted by rosie-j-potter.bsky.social

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 7d

Editing Day 25: 120894 words

Really hope tomorrow will reach our target word count and I can start querying again. :)

#amwriting #writersky #fantasy

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 7d

Re: Scenario 1: Police came banging on my door at 4 am, in a neighbourhood where burglars are known to yell "police" to trick you into letting them in. I yelled back "Sure, and I'm the Prince of Wales!" and went back to bed.

Turned out it was the police, they had the wrong house.

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 8d

Editing Day 24: 122653 words

So close! Ten more chapters left to shrink, mostly set in Serpentis.

#wasphole #fantasylit #fantasysky #amwriting #writingcommunity #authorsky #writingsky #booksky #writersky #readersky

Picture of Warwick Castle on whuch Serpentis is loosely based. Took picture before breakfast, no tourists yet, scribbling notes on everything I could hear (birds mainly), how long it takes to walk from one end to the other etc. I got chased by wasps that day, but I left that part out.

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 9d

My spooky baby boy 🎃🐈‍⬛️

#WaspholeBandit

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 9d

Editing Day 23: 123788

Mostly purging words like "down" and "up" or paraphrasing (e.g. fell down becomes toppled).

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 10d

Editing Day 22: 124535 words

Sitting DVPit out this year (had fun with #DVParty tho!)

I want characters representing me and mine; for whom ND is not their whole personality or storyline, but at the same time the impact is deeper than a few quirks. I feel like I achieved this with Tharron.

Tharron from Wasphole (image by viccsart)

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 11d

Editing Day 21: 125915

So... close... 🥵

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 12d

Editing Day 20: 127612 words

Definitely harder to chop words the closer we get to target!

#wasphole #fantasylit #fantasysky #amwriting #writingcommunity #authorsky #writingsky #booksky #writersky #readersky

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 13d

Editing Day 19: 128915 words

My coauthor has decided to rework the final battle 😬😭😨 ARGGGHH!! AGAIN?!? Comfortably in the double digits for full rewrites!

But... his ideas for the choreography are an upgrade.

Here we go again meme with boromir from lord of the rings.

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 14d

Editing Day 18: 129983 words

The goal of less than 120,000 is kinda in sight now?

#wasphole #fantasylit #fantasysky #amwriting #writingcommunity #authorsky #writingsky #booksky #writersky #readersky

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 15d

Editing Day 17: 131086 words

Brain still telling me I'm not a good enough writer, and it could be true! The only way we get to know is to pour our hearts and souls and time into something that might very likely fail.

#wasphole #amwriting #writingcommunity #authorsky #writersky

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 15d

When you have 2 cats but they're the same cat.

#WaspholeBandit

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 16d

Editing Day 16: 133634

My coauthor has joined in the editing. 😱 TBH I didn't want him to because;

1. He struggles with the concept of "less words."
2. We already edited heavily (this is draft 13) which means everything left is stuff we like but have to cut anyway.

#writingcommunity #writersky

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 17d

Day 15: 134646 words

Today my inner monologue is all;

"What makes you think you could be an author. You?!? Who do you think you are? You deluded..."

Not sympathy fishing but I said I'd be honest about this process and pushing past feeling like this is part of it. 😅

#writingsky #writersky

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 17d

Heavy night Bandit?

#WaspholeBandit

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 17d

Amazing!! 🎉

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 18d

Post you from a different era!

Me at 18 vs 38!

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 18d

Editing Day 14: 136103 words

Things that can go:
✅️ geographical rational behind Midra's weather patterns
✅️ minor characters backstories
✅️ half the words in any action sequence

Things I will not part with:
❌️ Robin, Ethan and Aubrei arguing about whether slowworms count as snakes.

Image @smolbus

Aubrei, Robin and Ethan from #Wasphole

Image by @smolbus

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 19d

Using a hair dryer to keep the kids' teddies fluffy is the most useful life hack the internet taught me.

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Nel is querying! @wasphole.bsky.social · 19d

Happy update- birdie was fine once it had some water and nibbles and recovered from the shock. He flew away shortly after that picture was taken which is great because I realllly didn't want to make the 2h round drive to the sanctuary! ❤️

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