Donna Ho
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Author ✍️ | Fiction editor 📚 | Querying—Debut YA Paranormal Romance (Completed): She hated seeing ghosts…until she fell for one
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BELLADONNA × THE LIBRARY OF SHADOWS
She never wanted to see ghosts—and definitely never meant to fall for one.

When her lab partner vanishes and returns as a ghost, Annabelle must uncover the truth before a resurrection ritual destroys everything she loves.

#YA #Paranormalromance #AmQuerying

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The In Between experience in four moods:

You’ll laugh. You’ll cry. You’ll swoon. You’ll shiver.

#YAFiction #HauntedRomance #AmWriting
I feel the same! I was picked too and did a little happy dance. Never have any luck with drawings.
Subtitles: on or off?

For me, I need them OFF! I’m too busy reading (hello, I can’t resist reading) to catch all the action and subtext. Sometimes what isn’t said is more important than what is. If I’m reading subtitles I may miss that.

#subtitles #debate
My first poem in 24 years:

A curled up leaf, brittle and dying
Transformed into new life.
A humming bird hovers
Among stars.

#poetry #dontlaugh #amquerying #prosebreak
Excited! I’ve been selected for #revpit #10queries! Now I have to wait patiently until the 24th. This is the part I’m not good at. 🤣 #amquerying
👻 reluctant medium | 💀 ghost boy yearning | 💫 chosen one | 🔥 slow burn | 🫶 found family
BELLADONNA × THE LIBRARY OF SHADOWS
She never wanted to see ghosts—and definitely never meant to fall for one.

When her lab partner vanishes and returns as a ghost, Annabelle must uncover the truth before a resurrection ritual destroys everything she loves.

#YA #Paranormalromance #AmQuerying

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But I chose to sit on the changes while I wait for this round of queries to pan out. Then, I learn through several sources that dreams are a bad opener. I’d already changed that, but too little too late. Right? 🤦🏼‍♀️

Third rounds the charm! 🤞🏻
Mostly crickets. I start getting the sinking feeling my opening pages aren’t shining like I want them to. I revise again, open in action, get to the meet-cute faster, but what was done was done (I’m disheartened because there are agents in that second batch that are dream agents..

Turns out, querying is a learning process. First batch, all but three form rejections (3 CNRs). One actually flagged my word count (108k!!) as the likely culprit. I spent two months trimming and tweaking, finally getting it down to 97k. Round two of queries go out, some fast rejections…
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🤦🏼‍♀️ I definitely did this. I have since revised to skip the whole dream sequence.
It’s been raining here all morning so this track feels right.

Introducing my writer side to the world (harder than it sounds. I know so many of you get that).

#yaauthor #authorlife #amwriting
Sent a round of queries for my YA paranormal romance before vacation—mostly rejections. It was 106k then. Trimmed it down to 97.5k and fired off another 20+. Now I wait (and wait) while it kills me slowly. #amquerying #writingcommunity #queryingtrenches #yafiction #debutauthor
Happy to say I am “booked” until April! Pun intended. ;-)
Got to meet a hero tonight. Totally worth it. Wasn’t expecting a comedy show. #rlstine #fearstreet #goosebumps
I messaged you on X.
Am I the only one who feels like I just don’t have the bandwidth to deal with social media marketing?
Just finished my twentieth #betaread for the year. Whew! Such good stories. I can’t wait for you to read them. #betareader #amediting #amreading