Dan Shive
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I'm sure you're wondering... - www.egscomics.com/egsnp/cinder...

"...What we're going to do with all these watermelons!"
"Smash them open on the beach while blindfolded?"
"How did you know?!"
#egscomics #webcomics
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I’m sure you’re right for plenty of people, but I imagine there are those involved who believe their own hype (especially if not involved with the actual tech end of things).
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If you saw this comic numbered "59-2" briefly, that was a mistake on my part (I numbered it 59, system auto-set to 59-2 to avoid conflict with existing 59). I redid it as 60.

I don't expect many to have encountered that, but in case anyone did, that's what happened.
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I'LL never tell!

I mean, obviously, I will tell, but I have to be a tease about it for a while, don't I.
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One might recall Tedd said "agents" before... - www.egscomics.com/comic/falsek...

Actually, it really was just Bishop who showed up. She's so tall, you see, that she was mistaken for two agents, and—ACK I'M SORRY DON'T KICK ME WITH YOUR LONG LEGS
#egscomics #webcomics
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A bit more to do left on the comic, but not a ton.
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Is it actually fair to say that "AI" has passed the SAT?

I say this because it feels more comparable to a human being able to take such tests with the internet at their disposal.

It's a technological achievement of a sort, but it's presented in a way that feels disingenuous to me.
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I want to revisit One Punch Man season one.

As much as I'm certain the animation was genuinely good—I don't expect to go back and think "that's bad, actually"—I think there's a degree to which I might have rose tinted glasses for just how good.

Like S-Tier instead of Super Ultra Deluxe S-Tier 🤷‍♀️
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(Specifically because it was doing it with a song, and it was automatic.)

(As a potential accessibility feature, it might be fine. I don't have all the details.)
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Without my asking for it, YouTube selected autodub audio for an anime opening, turning song into lifeless spoken words.

This was corrected by selecting the gear icon and setting the audiotrack to Japanese, but ye gods, it was trash.
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Goku is his own Worf.

“We’ve gotta show the new guy’s tough, so you’re losing round one, Goku.”

“Dang it.”

“Don’t worry! You’ll get a power up!”

“Still dang it.”
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I think Goku loses to Superman simply because Goku can’t win his first fight against someone like that.

It’s round two where Goku has any narrative chance.
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Past a certain point, Dragon Ball power-scaling is just “can this character hurt this character.” It doesn’t feel like there’s a tangible distinction beyond that.
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To be fair, I had a narrative thing I was doing with it, but the payoff’s not worth it being a tool in the character’s ongoing arsenal. Any difficult one-on-one fight would become “welp, we know how they’re going to try and deal with this.”
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Agreed. Elliot‘s default is extremely accepting, but he can also be influenced. His feelings of guilt about enjoying fights has made it so he doesn’t like getting introspective, so it took outside influences to get him to realize what he was doing.
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I can give this character a high risk, high reward spell, or I can just have them use their brain to win a difficult fight… HMM…

“CUT THE SPELL”

Really? You sure?

“YOU WRITING DRAGON BALL?”

Of course not.

“THEN CUT THE EVER-LIVING CARP OUT OF THAT”
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“I just heard about kerning and have decided I know more than everyone else.”
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Technically correct, the best kind of correct, doesn’t necessarily apply to people talking 😅
danshive.bsky.social
I'm sure you're wondering... - www.egscomics.com/egsnp/cinder...

"...What we're going to do with all these watermelons!"
"Smash them open on the beach while blindfolded?"
"How did you know?!"
#egscomics #webcomics
danshive.bsky.social
Posting a bit late, but I will boldly say I quite like this next EGSNP and the one after!

Unlike all the rest (kidding!)
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There's no shortage of 1. Perhaps way too much of 1. That's how you get mysteries where it's like "whelp, it's gotta be that character. I've no clue why or how, but we only had three possibilities, and two were just cleared short of a plot hole."

(Soon) "I was wrong! Plot hole for a twist ahoy!"
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I feel there are three good ways to do a proper mystery story and have it be entertaining.

1 - A core cast that is focused on. The mystery is a means to set them out on adventure and do things.

2 - Interesting suspects and witnesses who are possibly given greatest focus.

3 - A blending of 1 and 2
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Even if, at some point, I reveal that Grace lifted some specific car at some point, that will not have been the car she first lifted, nor shall it ever be illuminated upon whose car that was.

Unless I think of a really, REALLY good reason, but I prefer it forever unsolved.
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I decided to make the character I gave the placeholder name of “Dexter” for my novel a woman.

“Going to change the placeholder name, then?”

I never said that.
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I’m not sure? I’ve known people with canines that stood out for whatever reason. Not necessarily large, but somehow accentuated by their face?

Dang it, I wish I could who I’m thinking of. I’m sure there was someone IRL I used to think if as an example 😅
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“Hi! This is your body. I’ve initiated a helpful fear response.”

“THIS IS NOT HELPFUL”

“‘Course it is! Why, that thing you’re concerned about could pounce at any moment!”

“YOU’RE THINKING OF LEOPARDS”

“What are all things if not leopards?”