humiliation, because it's like they've watched too much porn and they think that women can only get off by being called names and treated rough to the point of becoming punching bags, lmao. wtf with het smut fanfiction srsly.

i'm only saying this because i read csm manga before anime/movie came out, and because the show of welcome to derry came with characters dumping lore, as if they were reading it from a book or something :/

so idk if they need to do a better timing thing, because a friend says that time is money in that industry, but idk. make it work for everyone? i know it's a lot of work, but then it would be a great thing to watch.

i now see that writing for tv/movies, it's fr an art, because while the visuals and effects can be good, if the story is rushed (just in the part of relationships or character development), then when you loose a character it doesn't hit the same. doesn't hurt.

Woooow!! That render (i think that's how it's called) you did is super good!! Amazing!! 100/10!!

Ig you can try pdf and if you not comfortable or see another way of doing it, then you can change it :)

(ah yes, i forgot to say that the monster dies. also nobody can find batman either hehe)

he's devoured by the beast, while a distressed tim is watching from the roof of the building, panting from all the running, his brain confused, anxious and his heart broken because he couldn't make it in time. he couldn't save jason. he couldn't confess his love for him.

just as he's falling, he believes he heard his name. someone calling him, and he can't help but smile, because it sounds like tim, and 𝘰𝘩, how he wishes things would've been different with him. a glance, a warm smile-- that would've been enough for him.

but before he can even wish for more, ++

batman's body like it's nothing and after a moment of contemplating the sunset, he moves his body, feeling the pain of broken bones, dragging heavy feet and just throws himself to the monster's mouth, hoping for the best.

++

... maybe he decides to throw batman's unconscious body to the beast first, because hey. fuck you, bruce. but also because there's part of the poison for the monster in him, and they need all of it to destroy it.

he stays there, on top of a tall building watching how the beast just swallows ++