Fizzy ….. I like your thoughts & words but your lines lack discipline. Create breaks that give your reader a chance to think, meditate on what you wrote.

I found a poetry app: PoemHunter. So far I am not impressed. The poems I found used pre-modernist techniques including forced rhyming and stale lyrics. It’s as if they never heard of William Carlos Williams or Louis Zukofsky . . . or Wallace Stevens.

I did a quick search and discovered that there are many #Ukrainian.poets
What are these poets writing about? I believe that there poems would improve our understanding of the bravery of Ukrainians. Life goes on in spite of the cruelty of the inhumane Russian war machine.