Anyway, if you like a creative's work, please tell us. Tell us what you like. Tell us what it means to you. Because we probably don't see it ourselves.

it really does, doesn't it?

Alexis Paine... smiled? The collared, kneeling girl smiled back, but it must be a mask, like the one Alexis always wore. A rotten emotion bloomed. She threw the stick. "Fetch."

"Okay!" Kia jumped up and ran after the stick. Alexis liked to throw, and she liked to fetch! It was fun to play together!

I feel like the kisses and the interaction of their bodies add a lot of personality to this, even without story or faces

so consider saying "I do not perfectly conform to my own aesthetic standards for myself"

rather than "I am not cute"

as that is more accurate

it's a good fic!