SkyWritesStories
@skywritesstories.bsky.social
The writing and creative side of @LeafScaleESO.
I write fanfics, short stories, original works, and hopefully soon novels in various worlds!
I write fanfics, short stories, original works, and hopefully soon novels in various worlds!
There was a brief description of Scylla in the story but I feel like this is a lot better, and earlier on in the story.
November 8, 2025 at 7:30 PM
There was a brief description of Scylla in the story but I feel like this is a lot better, and earlier on in the story.
Discriptions is the next move. There are some things I wanted to add as I was reading through it last night so. Yeah, I can see it. Thank you.
November 7, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Discriptions is the next move. There are some things I wanted to add as I was reading through it last night so. Yeah, I can see it. Thank you.
Ah ok, some more discriptions of the characters, maybe specifying distictive marks and such. I do have a bad habit of knowing what the characters look like in my head. But maybe that's not translating to pages. Maybe going back and rereading the scenes a bit more and adding more character
November 7, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Ah ok, some more discriptions of the characters, maybe specifying distictive marks and such. I do have a bad habit of knowing what the characters look like in my head. But maybe that's not translating to pages. Maybe going back and rereading the scenes a bit more and adding more character
Is there anything in particular that you like or don't like about the story thus far?
November 7, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Is there anything in particular that you like or don't like about the story thus far?