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Nicole Frail, Book Editor
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Nicole Frail Edits, LLC
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#RevPit Editor & Board Member

16 Years Fiction & Nonfiction Experience; 500+ Books Edited
Here are some genre/age category hashtags to use in your posts for easier matching:

#A - Adult
#MG - Middle Grade
#YA - Young Adult
#PB - Picture Book
#F - Fantasy
#H - Horror
#R - Romance
#T - Thriller
#SF - Science Fiction
#M - Mystery
#WF - Women’s Fiction/Book Club
November 14, 2025 at 6:45 PM
Does this have any romance in it? Is she simply forgiving and forgetting, or does something else happen with the man who hurt her in the past?
November 7, 2025 at 9:52 PM
If this is YA, is she a student herbalist? Or an herbalist in training?
November 7, 2025 at 9:48 PM
I second this!
November 7, 2025 at 9:45 PM
I was also caught by the Bigfoot reference! Is Catch a wizard who just hasn't come into his own yet, or a non-magical human? How did he get into a spy school for wizards if he doesn't know magic/is not inherently magical? (Love the idea of spell-hacked spycraft!)
November 7, 2025 at 9:45 PM
I'm wondering if there's a way to combine both of your pitches. The first seemed soft and emotional; this one seems more adventurous and like Edison is more confident. However, the stakes seem a little off. All fae on Earth are at risk, but Edison is only trying to change one town's mind?
November 7, 2025 at 5:40 PM
I love the sound of this, but I can't tell how believing in himself is going to help the fae. I'm also wondering if there's a way to fit in his link with the fae. If he has no magic, how is he involved with them?
November 7, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Got it! I would take out how old Jim was when his grandfather died, because mentioning him as a child/his age makes me immediately think it could be MG or YA. Unclear how much time passed since he was 10.
November 7, 2025 at 4:09 PM
I'd read this!
November 7, 2025 at 4:04 PM
That's quite the trio! I can't tell if this is MG, YA, or Adult?
November 7, 2025 at 4:02 PM