hrck yeah!

very well put!

also, jus' sayin', feeling sexy combats anxiety... i think it stops the adrenal gland naking adrenaline and replaces it with one of the good enzymes or something...

we learned a great deal about each other we'd rather not know but she is the best critic... even if we argue about metaphors now and then!

btw massive congrats on this! still remember you celebrating getting published and so happy for you even if you are stressed out of your head right now!

* become such an inveterate people pleaser that the idea of giving people tingles and more gives you a rush... do it for the exhibitionists reading in a public place and fighting to keep their face impassive!

century rifle? how many cosy mystery novel writers have caught a murderer in a sleepy coastal town? and if you have? a) they won't know that either b) the only people who are gonba slut shame you are angry evangelists who "accidentally" bought your book and those reviews are always hilarious!

i'm sure there are a lot of people very grateful about that right now...

but unfortunately the only advice i have is twofold:

* it's an action scene like any other! you've not actually been rawdogged by two guys in a sex club before? how many bernard cornwall wannabes have shot someone with a 19th

she's demi-sexual because she didn't think it was possible to find someone hot before you get to know them?

you know how easy posting to literotica is after your mother has helped you find a pre-industrial metaphor to replace the word piston?

now, not everyone has my relationship with their mother

+fist bump for 'hang on, i'm jyst writing two people living a normal life instead of plot stuff, how do i stop this normal conversation stuff, what is fiction aaaarghhhhh+

RIGHT?!?!!

the act but it's what i'm least confident with because i get very technical...

but writing asmrs has helped massively!