#12x12PB #scbwi #InkedVoices #50PreciousWords winner '23 HM '24
#amquerying
Here's one for you:
trailing behind
through oak-tree shade
bobcat shadow
Here's one for you:
trailing behind
through oak-tree shade
bobcat shadow
Here's a version:
skimming the surface
a quick green spark--
hawkpond dragonfly
or
skimming the surface
a small green spark--
hawkpond dragonfly
Here's a version:
skimming the surface
a quick green spark--
hawkpond dragonfly
or
skimming the surface
a small green spark--
hawkpond dragonfly
I enjoy the wavelike repetition of sounds-"whooshing shimmering"- and the sense of motion. You might try something like
shimmering splash
bioluminescent waves
blue on blue on blue
but I like your opening more!
I enjoy the wavelike repetition of sounds-"whooshing shimmering"- and the sense of motion. You might try something like
shimmering splash
bioluminescent waves
blue on blue on blue
but I like your opening more!