- underwent half a dozen revisions
- including expanding the poem considerably following an excellent suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social
- the first draft had more emphasis on Hana's sister
- I think there's an echo of something I read by Mary Renault in the poem
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- underwent half a dozen revisions
- including expanding the poem considerably following an excellent suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social
- the first draft had more emphasis on Hana's sister
- I think there's an echo of something I read by Mary Renault in the poem
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- I love Gary McCluskey's art :-)
- Fergus, now Donal's chief of guards, was originally Connol's guard + friend. He's one of the background figures whose doings are mostly left to the reader's imagination.
- call back to earlier "A horse ride. Fresh air. Nothing better."
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- I love Gary McCluskey's art :-)
- Fergus, now Donal's chief of guards, was originally Connol's guard + friend. He's one of the background figures whose doings are mostly left to the reader's imagination.
- call back to earlier "A horse ride. Fresh air. Nothing better."
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- added late, based on a suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social, to clarify that Fian's suicide does indeed accomplish a dark purpose
- the initial supernatural evil in the book is the demon, whose power is claimed by Fian after the demon dies, and is now passed on again.
- added late, based on a suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social, to clarify that Fian's suicide does indeed accomplish a dark purpose
- the initial supernatural evil in the book is the demon, whose power is claimed by Fian after the demon dies, and is now passed on again.
- as with the previous poem, this one was added based on a suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social to clarify that Fian committed suicide with an ulterior motive
- I love how Donal and Xau are now close enough friends that when Donal wants help, he asks Xau
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- as with the previous poem, this one was added based on a suggestion from @lisarodgers.bsky.social to clarify that Fian committed suicide with an ulterior motive
- I love how Donal and Xau are now close enough friends that when Donal wants help, he asks Xau
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