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They should really do another one like this. Ugh! I can dream...

*pretends to be shocked*

What I'm most worried about is Shingo. That guy doesn't seem capable of keeping a partner for long. Istg he better treat Rika well or else...

Who knows, maybe she'll be able to jump again someday. But for now, this is the best outcome for her career moving forward.

On a serious note, I'm relieved and glad that Rika is able to skate at all. Thinking of her untapped potential in singles will forever break my heart.