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Egor
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Editor₂ and Writer₁ from Almaty 🇰🇿 studying English Philology in Tbilisi 🇬🇪

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In the examples with the em-dash, yes, you could replace both with a colon or a comma or something. But there's an aesthetic difference. There's something almost ironic to the last sentence with the em-dash, but it would become a banal statement with a comma.

Okay, em-dash rant over. Promise.
September 19, 2025 at 8:39 AM
And yes, proper usage of em-dashes can be confusing. My rule of thumb is:

1. Colons indicate a linear relationship. (e.g. The rat: a tiny rodent.)

2. Em-dashes can indiace a linear or a contrastive relationship. (e.g. Lions—the kings of the jungle.
OR
Lions are the kings of the jungle—or the zoo)
September 19, 2025 at 8:37 AM
P.S. Thanks to @saken.me for convincing me to serialize my yapping and turn it into something interesting and potentially educational (one day!)

I think you will be seeing more posts like this in future :^)
September 9, 2025 at 3:58 PM
I think this system makes for a pretty fun way to distinguish between all the different stuff I get up to in my life.

And if you want to see even more weird, cool things from this book (that's more like lit crit than this grammatical analysis) take a look at the article I wrote about it last year:
"Hunting" "Dragons"
Samuel R. Delany & The Alien
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September 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM
These ₁ and ₂ distinctions are differentiated in some way that's never revealed to us in the original language (maybe it's a specific sound or syllable). They're separate from the base word, but change its meaning, making them more like some kind of universal work-based suffix
September 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM
The sociopolitical implications of this aside (though they're interesting for sure), I want to discuss this from the PoV of grammar. This isn't just using numbers to distinguish between two untranslatable words of a future language. You can talk about colleagues₁ and an office₂ and being busy₁ and ₂
September 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM
The story is set millenia in the future, on a socialist planet part of a galaxy-spanning civilization. The planet distinguishes between "jobs₁" which you work at for yourself, and "jobs₂", which you work at for your society. For example, the protagonist works as a diplomat₁ and a waste collector₂
September 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM
It's ironic because the sensor-activated blow-dryer they had is worse for germs than getting your hands dirty and cleaned with regular towels.
May 5, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Some Goodreads reviwers will literally sit there yapping on about how Mark Earlington was tracking down the Mysterious Lady for 3 paragraphs and make ME sift through their tepid water writing to find any crumb of their opinion on what they actually read!!!!
April 24, 2025 at 8:08 AM