It worked for me, although I really enjoyed the story and think the judges must have had a hard time - their story was really clever. We'll see what the next round brings - the person I am up against said this wasn't her best story, but I think it's still really good

I just read this, loved it, and congratulations.

And I searched for storied by Kris and read both of them and they were both awesome, thanks for sharing.

Round 1 doesn't even matter, have a look. Worst case you are tied for 2nd!

I love Writing Battle!

Me too, on to round 2. No knock out, so it will take them the same number of days to read. Aaaargh!