Rae Law - author. The Chrysalis Project 15/04/25
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The Chrysalis Project - MG - 04/25 Querying: The Barrett Chronicles (YA) & Curse of the Fart Witch(TM) - MG, The Skybridge Key (MG) WIP: Blackwood (a Wickerman retelling) Plotter, not a pantser. Software/Science IRL. Cheering everyone on!
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#Rewritten Goosebumps meets Wimpy Kid in stinky, spooky, spider-infested showdown. A Fart Witch wants to possess Jacob’s Abuela. His brother’s armed with beans. They’ve 1 shot to save the town & Abuela—with flower potion & sibling chaos. #SayExcuseMe #MG #F #PosterPit #Q
Ok - here’s an odd one. What famous/popular/blockbuster books would not be picked up if they were queried in 2025?

I’ve been reading some old bestsellers and its exposition hell 👎
Now with alt-text...#Rewritten Narnia’s coming of age+cannon fire & female rage.
The sea gives & takes.
It took Dad—imprisoned.
Then gave Mom back. Only now she’s a pirate in 1721.
To save Dad, I’ll cross centuries, face traitors & become something I never expected:A Barrett.
#YA #QuestPit #Q #HF #S
#Rewritten Goosebumps meets Wimpy Kid in stinky, spooky, spider-infested showdown. A Fart Witch wants to possess Jacob’s Abuela. His brother’s armed with beans. They’ve 1 shot to save the town & Abuela—with flower potion & sibling chaos. #SayExcuseMe #MG #F #PosterPit #Q
#Rewritten Narnia’s coming of age+cannon fire & female rage.
The sea gives & takes.
It took Dad—imprisoned.
Then gave Mom back. Only now she’s a pirate in 1721.
To save Dad, I’ll cross centuries, face traitors & become something I never expected:A Barrett.
#YA #QuestPit #Q #HF #S
I need to spend more time on BlueSky...it's come a long way over the past months.
#Rewritten Goosebumps meets Wimpy Kid in stinky, spooky, spider-infested showdown.

A Fart Witch wants to possess Jacob’s Abuela.
His brother’s armed with beans.

They’ve one shot to save the town & Abuela—with flower potion & sibling chaos. #SayExcuseMe
#MG #F #HA #QuestPit #Q
#Rewritten Narnia’s coming of age+cannon fire & female rage.
The sea gives & takes.
It took Dad—imprisoned.
Then gave Mom back. Only now she’s a pirate in 1721.
To save Dad, I’ll cross centuries, face traitors & become something I never expected:A Barrett.
#YA #QuestPit #Q #HF #S
#Rewritten
If LemonySnicket & Cpt Underpants had a stinky lovechild.

Saving the town from a Fart Witch?
Normal.

Saving your grandma from becoming the Fart Witch?
Personal.

Middle grade horror with stinks, sentient giant barking spiders & sibling chaos.
#MG #Q #F #HA #QuestPit
#Rewritten
Goosebumps meets Wimpy Kid.

Hexes of Eternal Stench.

Barking spiders.

A Fart Witch bent on possessing Abuela.

Only Jacob, his chaos-gremlin brother & their gang can save Woodville from destruction—with super-soakers, sibling mayhem & a well-timed fart. #MG #Q #F #HA #QuestPit
This sounds like us - my body sounds like rice crispies. Snap! Crackle! Pop!

In bed at 8:30 pm on Friday night because I gotta be at B&Q first thing Saturday morning. 🤪
When 12yo Jack learns he's Keeper of the crumbling Skybridge-a magical link b/w Earth & Arcador, he must find 7 Starstones, battle living shadows & face his deepest fears—or lose both worlds & his missing mom forever. #MG #F #AgentGuide #LitAgents
Hubs set up our WiFi today - the network name…MI-6 Surveillance.

We’re now waiting for the neighbourhood Facebook group to light up. 😈
I got a sliver of agent feedback and have rewritten the first 2 chapters of Skybridge. It feels so weird to front load the action instead of building and peeling away layers.

But until I’m a household name with a loyal fan base, I guess I have to play along.
TLDR- on Twitter, I’ve shared some insight on the inherent error in AI detectors.

Frankenstein - 30% AI

I’ve proposed a science experiment where we get together and check the detectors on public domain books to understand the false + rate.

This is more serious than I initially thought…
The Skybridge Key was half-ass written in 2020. It was only recently that one of my daughter’s friends read Chrysalis & asked me what else I wrote like that. I told her about Skybridge - she read a bit and loved it.

So I cracked it open and refined it. I learned a LOT in 4 yrs.
I’ve just sent my first query for The Skybridge Key.

I reviewed old query letters from 2019 for a different book and yikes. I wouldn’t have read my work either.
12yo Jack discovers he's the Keeper of the Skybridge—a magical link between worlds. To save both worlds, he must face shadows, solve ancient trials & recover 7 Starstones to heal the bridge before it collapses. #MG #2025Pit
Comps-Amari+NightBros, KeeperofLostCities
When Jack(12) learns he's Keeper of the failing Skybridge linking Earth &Arcador, he must find 7 Starstones, battle shadows, a Leviathon, fiery stag & a giant moth and face his deepest fears—or lose both worlds & his missing mom 4ever.
#MG #2025Pit
When 12yo Jack learns he's Keeper of the crumbling Skybridge-a magical link b/w worlds, he must find 7 Starstones, battle living shadows& face his deepest fears—or lose both worlds & his missing mom 4ever. #MG #Q #YouDeservepIt
#TalkingRaven #SnarkyGuide
Comps:Amari+NightBros, KeeperOfTheLostCities
Good morning and Happy Christmas - whether you celebrate the religious or secular Christmas, may your next few days be filled with all of those things which brings you joy.