Thank you for the recommendation. I just read “Paying the Price” for the first time, and it’s great. There’s so much to unpack. I’m concerned about the vague “In a study published in 2019…” type sources being cited (or uncited) within the essay, though. Did you address that with your students?

Many thanks @everywhereist.bsky.social. I read your cinnamon roll essay with my college freshman today. They were engaged, thoughtful, and a bit surprised by the words coming out of my mouth as I read it aloud.

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The same person who taught them to start their conclusions with "in conclusion" I'd guess.