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Debbie exton
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Writer, reader, mother & runner. Writing words any chance I get. #TeamPitchNBitch
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First 2 lines are straight out of a swiftie song!! So good!!!
Great pitch and this book has such a good hook
This book is so good it needs a home!!
Love this book and your writing so much!
I have an agent! I'm thrilled & overwhelmed to say I'm now repped by @laurabirdland at @GreeneandHeaton

It’s taken me 7 years & 5 books, but the ending (or beginning) is full of excitement because of Laura’s editorial vision for my grave-restoring MC.

Hooray!
#Writingcommunity
Sad this isn't the book I shall be beta reading for you!
Good luck!!
thank you my beta friend!
DIAL A FOR AUNTIES x LISTEN FOR THE LIE x DEAD ROMANTICS

When Edie finds a body above a grave, her prime suspect is the hot guy she just met.

Unfortunately he thinks the same about her.

To have a shot at love, they must find the real killer.

Or die trying.

#LuckyPit #PopUpPit #A #R #PopUpPitA
Thank you very much . I did some sleuthing and found her but she wants YA not adult so boooo
I need to find this agent!
DIAL A FOR AUNTIES x CASKET CASE

TFW you find the potential man of your dreams, discover a body moments later & then realise he’s your only suspect.

AITA if I date him & investigate him for murder at the same time?

#UNHINGEDPIT #A #Q #ROMCOM #MURDERMYSTERY
#1stLineThursday

‘For the most wild, yet most homely narrative which I am about to pen, I neither expect nor solicit belief.’

Doesn’t this offer the perfect curiosity seed—what could we possibly be about to read and how bad is it going to get?

Spoiler; it doesn’t disappoint.
#1stlinethursday

‘When I was seven, I found a door.’

Found not opened.

Golly every time I read that line I get goosebumps.

And even though the writer breaks the 4th wall, her capital D for Door paragraph sold me.
Wonderful and a masterful portal story.
#1stlinethursday

‘The scream ripped through the frozen air, sharp as a knife.’

All you need to know about the book is in this first line. The harshness of the winter, the fear, the threat and the mystery.

A creepy, atmospheric Gothic mystery that stars the Brontë family- perfect for Halloween!
#1stlinethursday

‘The studio was filled with the rich odour of roses, and when the light summer wind stirred amidst the trees of the garden, there came through the open door the heavy scent of the lilac, or the more delicate perfume of the pink-flowering thorn.’

What a masterpiece.
#1stLineThursday

‘Lost in the shadows of the shelves, I almost fall off the ladder.’

The intrigue in this line sparks my curiosity— how many shelves are there? The imagery of a cluttered bookshop is imagined.
Then the comedic tone assures me this story has oodles of voice.

Robin Sloan
#1stLineThursday

‘Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station will be held by anybody else, these pages must show.’

Love this pragmatic outlook and the curiosity this induces to read on— will he be the hero? Who else could it be?

#Masterclass

Charles Dickens
#1stLineThursday

“Deid apprentices tend to tarnish a man’s reputation after a while.”

The local dialect gives this first line so much voice - as does the chapter title.

The curiosity seeds are planted & the mystery & humour evoked set the tone perfectly for the rest of the book

Kevin Hearne 2020