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Elijah Yaks

@copybyelijah.bsky.social

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Conversion copywriter for coaches. Fix your "Book a Call" page to get more clients. Stop leaving money on the table. Free audit.

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 28d

Your "Book a Call" page has a conversion problem you can't see.

I'll find it for you.

I'm a conversion copywriter for coaches. I'm doing 3 free, no-pitch audits this week.

If your sales page isn't filling your calendar, DM me "AUDIT".

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 15h

Some days, posting feels pointless.

But someone out there needs your words.

Show up messy if you have to.

#AuthenticMarketing #LifeCoaching #ConsistencyWins

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 1d

Your ideal client isn't reading your sales page.
They're scanning it while distracted, stressed, and skeptical.
Your job: Make them feel understood in 3 seconds or less.
No pressure.
#Marketing #Copywriting #UX #SaaS

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 2d

They tell you to 'write like you talk.'
I say: 'Write like your ideal client talks.'
Use their words. Their fears. Their dreams.
That's how you connect.
#Marketing #Copywriting #SaaS #Product

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 3d

Had a client text me: 'Just booked 3 calls from the new page!'
That feeling never gets old.
This is why I do what I do.
Not for the words. For the wins.
#Copywriting #Business #Marketing #Results

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 3d

Your website isn't a brochure.
It's a salesperson.
It should:

· Greet visitors
· Understand their pain
· Offer a solution
· Handle objections
· Ask for the sale
Is your website a good salesperson?
#WebDesign #Marketing #SaaS #Startup

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 3d

Serious question for coaches:
What's harder for you?

· Writing the actual copy
· Knowing what to say in the first place
The answer determines everything.
#Marketing #Coaching #Business #SaaS

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 4d

I used to think I needed a fancy vocabulary to be a good copywriter.
Then I learned that 'Get more clients' outperforms 'Leverage synergistic growth paradigms' every single time.
Talk like a human. Profit like a business.
#Copywriting #Marketing #Startup #Business

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 4d

Good copy isn't written.
It's assembled.
Like a chef using ingredients, we use:

· Pain points
· Desires
· Objections
· Social proof
The magic is in the recipe, not the ingredients.
#Copywriting #Marketing #Business #SaaS

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 4d

Raise your hand if you've ever stared at a blank page for an hour, wrote one sentence, deleted it, and called it a day. 🙋‍♂️
The struggle is real.
But the breakthrough is on the other side.
#Writing #Creator #Startup #Marketing

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 5d

Let's be real:
Your 'Book a Call' page isn't converting because you're asking for commitment before building trust.
It's like proposing on the first date.
Slow down. Build rapport. Earn the click.
#Marketing #Sales #Coaching #SaaS

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 5d

Watching a coach's sales page:
Headline: 'Unlock Your Potential'
Subhead: 'Book a Call'
Me: facepalm
That's like a restaurant sign saying 'Experience Culinary Bliss' with 'Order Now' underneath.
Where's the menu? The prices? The reason to click?
#Copywriting #Marketing #Coaching #WebDesign

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 5d

Hah, you get it. It's like...
A typist worries about the dictionary.
A marketer worries about the person holding it.

One is playing with words. The other is playing with psychology.

(And thanks, man. You always catch the real point.)

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 6d

First client call today:
Them: 'I just need better words.'
Me: 'You need to understand why your clients hesitate at the buy button.'
Them: '...oh.'
We're not word-decorators. We're psychologists who type.
#Copywriting #Freelance #Business #SaaS

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 6d

Hot take: 'Just be authentic' is terrible advice for coaches.
Be strategic.
Be professional.
Be clear.
Authenticity without strategy is just oversharing.
#Marketing #Business #Coaching #Startup

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 6d

100%. The market feels the difference even when the client can't articulate it.

That slight friction from a weak word, that tiny moment of doubt from a confusing phrase—it all adds up to a 'no' they never tell you about.

Precision compounds.

(Appreciate you adding this, Emir.)

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 6d

My biggest copy breakthrough happened in a grocery store.
I saw a label: 'Not just hot sauce. Adventure in a bottle.'
They weren't selling ingredients. They were selling an identity.
Your coaching program isn't a service. It's a transformation.
Sell the identity.
#Marketing #Business #Coaching #SaaS

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

You know you're a copywriter when you spend 20 minutes debating between 'Discover' and 'Explore' for a button.
Your client wouldn't notice.
But you will.
And that's the difference between good and great.
#Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Product #Startup

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

I'm doing 3 free conversion audits this week.
I'll find the #1 thing costing you booked calls.
No pitch. Just a 2-min Loom showing you the leak.
DM 'AUDIT' if you're serious about fixing it.
#Marketing #Coaching #Startup #Founder

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

Exactly. The founder/builder mindset is about how it works.

The client's mindset is about how it feels.

Bridging that gap is the entire job of conversion copy. It's not about dumbing it down—it's about translating value into emotion.

Scoutforge is a great example of a tool that tackles this.

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

Client: 1 call/week from his sales page.
We changed 3 lines of copy.
Not the design. Not the whole page. 3 lines.
Result: 4-5 calls/week.
The problem is rarely the whole page. It's the 3 critical lines no one is looking at.
#Marketing #Results #SaaS #Tech

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

Just provide value' is the worst advice for coaches.
You provide value. Your competitor provides value.
The winner is the one who communicates it in a way that makes the client feel understood.
That's not value. That's positioning.
#Marketing #Business #Coaching #SaaS

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 7d

Good copy isn't creative. It's clear. It takes the mess in your customer's head and gives them a simple path forward. Stop being poetic. Start being persuasive.
#Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Tech #Startup

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 8d

Here's a free copywriting trick: Read your sales page out loud. If it sounds like a robot wrote it, your clients will feel it. Write for humans. Profit.
#Copywriting #Marketing #SaaS #Startup #Business

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Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 8d

Your website is losing you money right now. I'll bet you $0 (because I'm not reckless) that your main headline is weak. DM me your site—first 3 get a free 2-minute tear-down.
#Marketing #WebDesign #SaaS #Tech #Founder

Elijah Yaks @copybyelijah.bsky.social · 8d

I almost quit copywriting in my first year. I was trying to sound like a 'guru' and it was exhausting. The day I started writing like I talk was the day I got my first real client. Be human.
#Freelance #Writing #Career #Startup #Tech