vivalisse (the once and future clo)
clothonono.bsky.social
vivalisse (the once and future clo)
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viv (in persona 5 hell) aka clo (the silmarillion one). they/she. writes fic. 18+. ao3: https://archiveofourown.org/users/clothonono tumblr: https://www.tumblr.com/blog/clothonono
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Hi, I'm Viv (for P5 purposes) or Clo (if you know me from Silm.) I write fanfic. At the moment, it's only Persona 5 fanfic. Thread of links below.
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I literally forgot to post this, but I finished that piece some times ago !!!

#persona5royal #art #p5 #persona
Incidentally can’t recommend enough just writing fic you like and then rereading it whenever you want. Like damn this author agrees with me about everything AND their jokes are funny. Jackpot.
Reading back my own P5 fics and watching my characterisation opinions develop like hmm what if Ren was more Gender than that. No more than that too.
the wolf who grips his prey the dog who finds his master…! no one is doing it* like victor hugo tbqh

*toxic yaoi
this is specifically about this one bit from the book
Reappearing from the mists to say: les mis AU. Ren is Jean Valjean. Akechi is Javert. all the other phantom thieves are misc loveable revolutionaries except Morgana who will be playing the role of Cosette.
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then I tried to imagine the girls all getting hit by the gender beam and got distracted by how terrifyingly hot masc haru would be.
still thinking about this. ren recognizes that some of his friends feel bad and weird about the forcefem status effect and starts heroically jumping in front of the gender beam. so noble. such a sacrifice. ren is spoiling the palace ruler's fun by being so obviously willingfem.
I think it would be funny if there WAS a forcefem status effect. This Sure Is A Weird Palace.
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ren is used to akechi’s issues being the invisible third party in their whole thing but HOW can he pass up this chance
forcefemmed Ryuji has magnificent tits. boy is stacked no matter what.
taking notes. nodding frantically. everyone trying to reassure akechi that he’s cute as a girl makes it worse.

(Yusuke: really an almost classical beauty -
Akechi: shut up shut up SHUT UP)
- Ryuji is pretty distressed initially but easily distracted by his own boobs, & then pivots unexpectedly into opinions about sports bras (how’s he supposed to run like this? what the hell!)
- Akechi is having a BAD time
- Morgana is offended no one noticed (dude, you’re a cat)
- Yusuke is fine (doesn’t care)
- Ren is fine (loving this)
I think it would be funny if there WAS a forcefem status effect. This Sure Is A Weird Palace.
actual secret of fanfic success is to write a lot and also make jokes. that’s it.

‘what about making it good’ don’t worry! if you write a lot this happens on its own!
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#TopGoroWeek2025 #明主 #akeshu @topakechi.bsky.social
Day 6, Hypnosis

Akechi in Persona 5 Tactica brainwashed by Marie. Shout out to whoever on the dev team came up with putting Joker in a collar with a chain
realistically chaps it is zero fic between now and January. if you see me posting fic tell me to stop and do my job. sucks though.
I am very tired and I miss writing fic: the viv story.
anyway a plague on auxiliary verbs, present participles, the definite and indefinite article, and almost all adverbs. I feel so sure I've killed my habitual repetitions and then I read something out loud and oh the ugly jangle.
'I want the effect of reading this to be like staring down into a still dark pool of water and seeing something moving at the bottom' okay. have you considered that this is very hard work.
the thing i'm working on needs to be stylish and sharp. reading back over paragraphs like how many words are just here because I always put them here. why am I overtagging the dialogue. can I make this shorter.
spend so much time at the moment thinking about how to slice down my prose. my default is workmanlike and straightforward and its main virtues are that it's easy and I can do 2k of it every day without thinking very hard.