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James ~Yes Mum, I’m still doing “the writing bit”~
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Wannabe Author. Writes a lot of fantasy and a thruppence of sci-fi. A lover of Shakespeare, space, and sudoku. Married to an absolute lad. He/him jamesfineganauthor.com
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Ryan & Albert live 200 years apart - but once per day a time-slip lets them meet. Now they need to solve the mystery of Clarence Hall before they accidentally change history!

Oh… and try not to fall for each other in the process!

NOT TECHNICALLY GHOSTS

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*sigh*
Guess I’ll put Doctor Who script in the same ‘secondary project’ pile as:

- Witch opens ‘fake’ magic school
- Blacksmith stranded in a flying city
- Space-husbands sci-fi epic

I’ll pick one eventually!
Urrgghh edit my stupid important book or have nerdy fun writing my Doctor Who script? Decisions decisions…
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October 25 Wrap-up!

✍️ Good start on Not Technically Ghosts part 2 edits!

👨‍💼 On the path to getting new day-job!

🔀 Mostly fixed a Not Technically Ghosts side plot that had been bugging me!

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Very happy with work done today. Been dithering for some days over a side plot that just wasn’t hitting as I wanted. Nearly scrapped it (again) but after tweaking a scene and planning changes ahead - looking good now! Benji lives to see another day!
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Hmm writing (another!) new scene I QUITE like... but that I'm 70% sure I won't include in the book. Still, nice to have as backstory. May incorporate elsewhere.
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At last - x2 new scenes finished. A very necessary extra 3200-ish words, but I'm happy with the additions. Getting into one of my favourite sections now, looking forward to *these* edits!
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Close to being done on x2 new scenes I’ve needed to add. Happy with how they’ve come out but eager to get on with actual editing again!
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Always feels counterintuitive to add scenes during editing but these last couple feel really needed. Letting the plot breath and organically get the mains where they need to be.
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Welp if I keep writing much more of this I’ll have no choice but to count Witch-wip as my new side project! (Christopher does NOT approve of me arranging pages on his side of the couch)
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Edits on this particular scene have been fighting me all week. Needed to add a new part, but dithered between it being a few lines or a whole new section. Well now it's TWO new sections. Ho hum.
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Had a deleting day - found a subplot that I'm not happy with. Plus it was a tiny bit cliché and stretched credibility. Cut! There's 3000-ish words back
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Until then, the adventures of the Spirit Rider carry on forever in the world of dreams. When the right day comes, Sam, Grim, Acheron, Legio, Mr. Cinnamon, the Queen, the DUCKS, and the world of Paralex will be waiting!
🦆💀✨🧙🫅
So one of two things will happen:
1) There's a market boom for this type of story and I re-enter the query pit.

or...

2) When my ducks(😉) are in a row and finances are good enough to do everything as I've always wanted -- I'll self publish.
(cont.)🧵
But Spirit Rider ISN'T DEAD! This is still my 'magnum opus'. After half my life working on it, I still think about the world and story every single day. If my main or side project aren't working I can freely hop onto writing a new Spirit Rider book, if only just for me!
(cont.)🧵
The great thing is, with Spirit Rider shelved I'm now free to put my full focus behind my other projects. The feeling of having the story sat in limbo has really weighed on me, so that's a load off!
(cont.)🧵
I knew there were a lot of points that didn't make this story trad-pub-friendly. But I still think I've made a good go of it. I've scrounged for all the agents I thought might fit. Maybe I'm being dumb - maybe that very next query is the magic one? But I don't see it.
(cont.)🧵
So I'm officially shelving my first book, Spirit Rider: The Royal Problem -- but I'm not sad, no woe-is-me stuff!
(cont.)🧵
And that's a wrap on edits for Part 1 of Not Technically Ghosts! Part 2 is a LOT meatier so can't decide if it'll be easy to do big cuts, or I'll agonise over every scene??
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a picture of a girl on a slide with the words so fun
Alt: Gif - thorough unimpressed woman slides down a slide. Text: So fun...
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September 25 Wrap-up!

✍️ NEARLY finished Not Technically Ghosts (part 1) edits!

🚴‍♂️ Got on a new health kick!

🧙‍♀️ Started a new witchy wip! (Madam Quail’s Totally Legitimate Witching School Where Absolutely No One Gets Eaten)

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Very happy with this unplanned pov shift. Had gotten too stuck on the idea all switches need to have a kind of symmetry. Now this quite pivotal scene gets half each!
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Into edits for the final scene of Part 1 of Not Technically Ghosts! Splitting POVs, bringing elements from later to now, more feelings, more details - onwards!
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Edits getting good now! Had disliked underwritten this story felt in places. Done a lot of enriching work so far. Just hoping there’s some fat to trim in the middle and pull the wordcount back!
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Had the chance to read CP’s high-tech Red Riding Hood story that’s part of this collection - and people are in for a TREAT! Better believe I’ll be buying my copy on day one!
🥿 a heisty Cinderella
🥀 a gender-swapped Beauty and the Beast
✨ a fairy tale crossover Frog Prince
🗡️ a dark fae Hansel and Gretel
☣️ a high-tech Red Riding Hood

What more could you want?

Snag your #ARC! docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1F...

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