Not everyone is going to like the same thing but that's alright! I don't think you need to change anything since basically everything that happens leads up to Katsuki being turned into a nomu, the torture, the lobotomy, all of it

I found the first 17 chapters the foundation and introduction on everything that leads up to Katsuki getting nomufied. Some people may be sensitive to topics like torture and lobotomy, probably why some haven't read the fic. Thats my guess 😭

Eee thank you!!

Ah, no worries! Take as much time as you need, your quality of work is absolutely amazing and I just love nomucchan

Are there more chapters about 24, if so, where can I find it?

Hes so precious