I’m going to write some yoonjin tomorrow, does that help a tiny bit?

So annoying

(Best coffee all round, actually)

He is 100% correct on Melbourne, Australia having the best flat whites in the world and that is another reason to love him

OMG juni I haven’t read this!! Thank you for the treat 💜

11 of course!

20 😊

Yes ma’am! 🫡

Juni fighting!

Helped to build the tension. There was immediate reactions from the character whose pov we were in but there wasn’t much time for a lot of internal dialogue etc

Ah, honestly, I don’t think I really have enough knowledge about writing technique to even answer that question! (Totally untrained amateur here!) It was a complex scene so switching POVs gave slightly different perspectives on a whole bunch of things that was going on at once, and

Within a scene. Often that’s about pacing; introspection or character development gets big chunks from one POV, but I wrote an action sequence recently where it switched literally every paragraph or two.

I guess it’s more what feels right at the time than any particular rules 🤷🏻‍♀️