Id be happy for your feedback if you do.

I realize it's not necessarily the type of story for everyone's tastes. But I think its just so well recorded that it really became more of an audio play.

Maybe I'm an anomaly, but to me there is no bigger turn off than having sex with someone who's not in the mood and only doing it because they feel obligated or just trying to get it over with.

I'll pass, thanks. Let's wait til were BOTH in the mood.

agreed. Neither of the scenes I mentioned were writen with the intention to titilate, especially the zombie scene. It was meant to be horrific, not erotic.

Got that beat.

in Night Of The Giving Head, a female zombie bites a guy's dick off mid blowjob. He collapses in agony, bleeds out and dies.

It was a horror story of course, but still I was surprised I got away with that one.

I wouldn't worry about it too much.

I wrote a story where a guy gets shot in the middle of sex and bleeds out and its been up for years.

Oh it was controversial, for sure, but it got published and to date no one has reported it.

That's exactly the problem we discussed and just how close the story could dance around that problem without being either too specific or too vague.

I think the final ending Bazzle came up with worked perfectly, and so do other readers it seems

Nice to see such positivity in the comments. I knew we discussed the ending and how it might be recieved, but its very cool most readers seem to get what you were going for.

I would except it's not so little.

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Really enjoyed, both editing and just reading it. Its your characters that truly elevate your stories because you have a great way of making them fun and sexy while also keeping them grounded and human.

ok that's me pretty much every night lol.

I'll give it a listen ASAP

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