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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 22h

New month, new week, time for some writing advice. Author Terry Prachett said this: "Your first draft isn’t for readers—it’s for you. Get the bones down; polish comes later."

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 4d

It's time for #FridayFunnies! Since it's #Halloween, I decided to rerun an old favorite. Enjoy your day! #bookcoach #editor #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 4d

I’m excited to share that I’ll be giving a free webinar sponsored by the Florida Treasure Coast chapter of Sisters in Crime!

It’s called “5 Strategies to Make Your Series Shine.”

It’s free, fun, and full of takeaways you can use right away.

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 5d

“The scariest moment is always just before you start.” — Stephen King

Every blank page looks bigger before you type. Start scared—courage builds in motion.

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 6d

Dialogue isn’t small talk—it’s story in motion.

Every exchange should reveal character or advance conflict. Want a quick test? Read your scene aloud. If it sounds like a script, trim. If it sounds alive, keep it.

Polish your dialogue for impact and realism.

#EditingTips #CharacterBuilding

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 7d

Who can relate? Besides me, of course. Tell me in the comments what you're reading.
#bookcoach, #editor #bookeditor #amediti #bookcoach

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 7d

Happy Monday! It's a new week!
Some weeks you’ll fly, others you’ll crawl. Both count.

The real progress is showing up, even when confidence lags.

Writing is learned through doing—every messy draft teaches you something true. Keep going; your story matters.

#WritersLife #Authors #WritingTips

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 11d

For today's #FridayFunnies, I went with something seasonally appropriate! Happy fall, y'all! #editor #serieseditor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 11d

A sagging middle kills momentum. The fix? A strong midpoint.

It’s the moment that changes everything—an insight, betrayal, or revelation that forces your protagonist to act differently. The best midpoints deepen emotion and escalate conflict.

#PlotDevelopment #AmWriting #WritersLife

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 14d

Flat tension kills great stories.

At every major point, ask: what’s the worst that could happen if my protagonist fails? Then make it worse.

High stakes keep pages turning and readers emotionally invested.

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 18d

It's #FridayFunnies time again! And this week, I'm back to my silly self! Enjoy! #editor #bookcoach #serieseditor #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 18d

Authors are receiving cold call emails from a supposed book club wanting to spotlight their books and do a guest Zoom meeting (for a fee). It's a SCAM in case anyone else is being approached.

These are real book clubs that this scammer is impersonating.

Please be careful, my friends.

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 19d

Revision magic happens when you trim the clutter.

Words like just, really, and that can sneak into every sentence—cut them and watch your prose tighten instantly.

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#EditingTips #WritingTips #WritersLife #WomensFiction #SuspenseWriter

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 19d

I bet I'm not the only one who can relate to this, am I? #editor #reader #storylover

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 19d

That first page? It’s your handshake with the reader. Don’t waste it on setup or history.

Start where the pulse beats—an action, a decision, a hint of danger or desire. Pull us in, then earn the right to slow down later.

Need help crafting a strong opening? I can help you get there.

#WritingTip

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 19d

Your opening scene sets the tone and promise of your story. Start with emotion, or tension—not backstory.

Whether it’s a chase, a charged conversation, or quiet unease, make readers feel something immediately.

Want help nailing that first chapter? Let’s work together.

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 20d

As a special thank-you to my newsletter readers, I’m offering a free review of your first chapter.

I’ll look at what’s drawing readers in, where the pacing might drag, and how to make your opening shine.

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · 25d

Hello and welcome to this week's #FridayFunnies! When you think about it, this one is true, right? Happy weekend to all! #editor #serieseditor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Oct 3

It's #FridayFunnies time! I just gotta ask, how many of you can relate to this? #editor #serieseditor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Sep 26

It's Friday, and you know what that means! #FridayFunnies! I'm back to being silly. Enjoy, and have a great weekend! #serieseditor #bookcoach #editor #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Sep 19

And here I am, with another #FridayFunnies. Right now, I'm wishing I could escape to a bookstore and never leave. How about you? What's your favorite bookstore? Mine's in the comments. Leave yours there too! #bookcoach #editor #serieseditor #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Sep 15

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Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Sep 12

It's #FridayFunnies time again. This one may not be as silly as usual, but it's quite true. For me the drink of choice is tea, but the sentiment remains the same. Enjoy the weekend, y'all. #editor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Sep 5

It's time again for #FridayFunnies! I must say, I 100% agree with this week's choice! What other silliness does the English language include? Let me know in the comments! #editor #serieseditor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

Editor Sue @suetoth.bsky.social · Aug 29

Happy #FridayFunnies! And happy unofficial end of summer and start of fall! Here's a giggle to start the holiday weekend! #editor #serieseditor #bookcoach #tellyourbeststory #itsgoodtolaugh

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